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Two months after The Wrong Jedi

Ahsoka placed the platter of stinking food on the table in front of a family of Gamorreans. Why anyone would actually order food smelling like that was beyond her but they seemed to like it. I should just be glad I have this job. It hadn't taken Ahsoka long to realize Jedi didn't have many marketable skills in he civilian world, and at her age, finding a job had been even harder. 
Ahsoka headed back toward the kitchen. Hopefully, the next customers would want something vaguely edible.
A man, his head covered by some sort of cloth, stood in her way. Ahsoka tried to duck past him but he blocked her. He gave her a lopsided smile that he probably thought was dashing. At least he's not as ugly as the one last week. That one had been so annoying Ahsoka had been tempted to use her lightsaber.
"So, when do you get off work?" Something about the way the man stood told Ahsoka he was dangerous, though he wasn't currently being aggressive.
Ahsoka glared at him. "It doesn't concern you." She tried to stare him down but he didn't move and she wasn't about to push past him. She touched her only lightsaber, which was concealed under her long shirt.
"She's way out of your league, Dengar!" a female's voice shouted from across the tavern. 
Ahsoka's gaze flashed to a corner booth. Sitting at it was a Zabrak woman. Sugi. A Theelin woman sat next to her.
Dengar shrugged "Relax, Sugi, I was only playing around."
Sugi got up and headed toward Dengar. "From what Lattz here tells me, a guy in your group fooled around and got a lightsaber in his gut for his troubles."
Dengar squinted at Ahsoka. "You do look familiar."
Sugi glared at Dengar. "You idiot, that's Ahsoka. She was on the holonews a few months ago."
Dengar stepped out of Ahsoka's way. "My apologies. I didn't recognize you." The stupid smirk never left his face.
Sugi glanced around the cantina. "How about you come sit with us?"
Dengar winked at Ahsoka.
Ahsoka hesitated.
"No-one is waiting for food," Sugi said. "You can sit for a while."
Ahsoka let Sugi lead her to the booth. Sugi motioned for Ahsoka to sit next to Lattz. Ahsoka sat, glad she wasn't next to Dengar. Sugi leaned forward across the table. "How did you end up here? With the price of the food, I know it doesn't pay well."
Ahsoka hung her head. "The only things I know how to do are flying and fighting. There's a lot of anti-Jedi sentiment and the ones who are friendly to the Jedi don't trust someone my age in the cockpit of their aircraft."
Sugi leaned back and folded her arms across her chest. "If you're interested, I can get you a good job."
"Bounty hunter? I don't think so." Ahsoka met Sugi's gaze.
"It's a job defending farmers from a gang, like last time. Only difference is that this time, you'll get paid."
Dengar smirked. "Nothing immoral about this job. It's squeaky clean."
"What do you say?" Lattz asked.
Ahsoka looked at the three bounty hunters, then at the dingy cantina. "I'm in."
Since the cancelation of The Clone Wars means there is a chance we'll never find out what happened to Ahsoka(at least until a comic or something comes out), I decided to do a short story about her. It isn't as actiony as my other ones but it's more just something I wrote to give myself, and hopefully others a little closure, at least in fanfic.
I hope the characters sound like they're in-character. I had some trouble with dialogue and jestures, especially with the bounty hunters, who are cool but with so few episodes, it's hard to know exacly what they'd say.
This is not a part 1 of anything. Maybe I'll write more about Ahsoka's future adventures but that would be a ways down the road.
EDIT: Here's another chapter in Ahsoka's saga: [link]
I've done some other CW fanfic, which is now outdated but you can still read it here. [link]
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Lady-Lisette Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student Writer
This was really good! I loved reading it a lot! Since I think all of us are in a lot of speculation as to what happens to Ahsoka after she left the Order. Part of me likes to think she teamed up with someone like Ventress, or Sugi (who I want more episodes of but the show was CANCELED.) Anyway, this was a fun fic to read :3
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Rebel-Rider Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! 
I think I really would have liked to see her team up with Sugi and her team. Sugi was a cool character who didn't get nearly enough screen time. (It also would have been neat to see more of Sugi's opinion of the Jedi since she never opposed them but didn't think very highly of them.) I heard a rumor that they may have been working on the bonus episodes and there could be a bounty hunter arc somewhere in there.
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Lady-Lisette Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student Writer
I would love to see more Sugi! All well...that's what fanfics are for, I guess.
Yup, the rumor is true...the bonus content is finished and will include a bounty hunter arc. I know Cad Bane and Boba Fett are in it for sure, but I don't know about anyone else. Sure would be cool to see bounty hunters like Sugi, Embo, and Sing get one last appearance!
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Rebel-Rider Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep.
I hope Sugi's in it too. I wonder if Sugi or any of the other bounty hunters will make it into the Rebels era. (Cad Bane could end up with a rather short life, considering Boba becomes the galaxy's best bounty hunter.) 
I also wonder what Sugi would think of the Empire. She does have some morals, which could put her at odds with the Empire.
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Lady-Lisette Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student Writer
Sugi...yet another character with lots of potential that is never really shown...so far, though; I hope to see her in Rebels.
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Rebel-Rider Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd say she has a decent chance of showing up. After all, she is the type who could realistically have survived the Rise of the Empire without much difficulty. 
I gotta wonder if this bonus bounty hunter arc will involve Boba and Cad Bane fighting.
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100NETTE Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Student Filmographer
wow really good! :D
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Rebel-Rider Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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100NETTE Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Student Filmographer
yw :)
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SilverSource Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, I realy like it! And the caracters are just real!
Would you do a part 2?
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Rebel-Rider Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I did do a part 2. [link]
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SilverSource Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :D
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Rebel-Rider Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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Rebel-Rider Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! I had a hard time trying to get everything feeling like what the characters would say. (I had to look back at a few of the parts where Dengar had lines to try to get some stuff about him better.)
I might eventually do another part. It would probably be a while though. I do have some older Clone Wars fanfic on here if you want to check that out. (Of course, that was written before the end of Season 5.)
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SilverSource Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcom, I think that part Dengar was realy good.
And thank you for the llama! :)
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Rebel-Rider Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. After seeing the way he acted around Ventress, I figured he'd be a bit of a flirt around Ahsoka. I hope no-one thinks I'm trying to ship Ahsoka and Dengar. :P
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SilverSource Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LOLZ :D
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lordhadrian Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
Love it! Wouldn't mind a part 2 :)
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Rebel-Rider Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe someday. Not right now though. I need to write on stuff I plan to publish someday. :P (Not many people are lucky enough to be able to make a career out of writing fanfic.)
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lordhadrian Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
:) Keep up the good work. I'm still trying to finish reading your earlier stuff, and I look forward to future stories
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Rebel-Rider Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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Jedi-Cowgirl Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like it :)
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Rebel-Rider Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
I wonder when, or if, that bonus content will be released.
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Jedi-Cowgirl Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'd sure like to know...
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Rebel-Rider Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I heard that Filoni might be working with Disney on the new series. I have very little faith in Disney but that does seem like good news.
Maybe I've asked this before but have you watched the Avatar TV series? I think the sequel series is going to be back this fall so that's something to watch if Revolution doesn't get renewed.
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Jedi-Cowgirl Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I hope he does....

Revolution is actually back. Next week is the third episode of season 2.
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Rebel-Rider Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The episodes are pretty good.
This is Season 1. They just went on a very long Christmas break.
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Jedi-Cowgirl Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
From what I heard it's the next season. That's weird.
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Rebel-Rider Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wikipedia said it was still in Season 1.
Another person who commented on this story sparked an idea I had of making a group for fanfic that continues The Clone Wars.
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GeneralHerbison Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
We need people to keep pumping out CW stories to keep it alive since that Disney scum cancelled it.

A really nice piece, Ahsoka becoming a bounty hunter (vaguely familiar to Ventress and her situation). Though personally I envisioned she set off to reunite with Lux after leaving the Order.

Stand strong and stand together. We must oppose Disney's stupid ideas to destroy something we all love
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Rebel-Rider Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If it weren't for the money they'll make from the next movies, I'd almost think they couldn't tolerate a good TV show making it to a hundred episodes.
Thanks! I figure ending up as a bounty hunter would be pretty likely. After all, Jedi don't really get taught normal things, like running a business.
I've never written romance so that's probably an idea for someone else to explore. (In my other story, they didn't end up together, mainly because I had Lux join the Rebellion and I wanted to keep Ahsoka out of it so she wouldn't get killed.)
I wonder if someone should make a group just for stories/art that would be a continuation of The Clone Wars.
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GeneralHerbison Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
That is actually a very interesting idea. We should form that group. Send me a Note if you would be interested in doing it
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PeachyPuppyGirl30 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
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